Saturday, 28 April 2012

Poem : Soulmate




                    Once anon ......... 
                    Once anon I brave, 
                              Those sombre treacherous trail 
                    Fallen leaves crumble beneath my feet,
                              Heart drumming yet another beat.
                    Cobwebs veil my vision deep
                              With faltering vestige I proceed,
                    To conquer my prior defeat.

                    Once anon .........
                    Once anon I dare,
                              Striking thunder with fury and vigour,
                    Hide I no more in torment and fear.
                              Cloud of despair can sink me no longer,
                    Deep down within, the power now trigger.
                              Storm tempestuous, ruffle not my abode dear,
                    Fortified I am with ample pain, hurt galore forever.

                    Once anon .........
                    Once anon I revive,
                              No more can I be made humble, as
                    You my love, protect and hold me from stumble.
                              Sheltering in your warmest bosom
                    Showering kisses of passion crimson,
                              Embracing my soul with amour bountiful
                    Loneliness, my love, you are so wonderful.

                    Once anon .........
                    Once anon I believe,
                              You will stand by me through the overcast alley
                              Till I cross the daunting, agonizing valley.
                              My soulmate loneliness, I breathe for you only .............

both pics courtesy : media.photobucket.com

Ruprekha Mushahary
28th April 2012

40 comments:

  1. What a beautiful poem with powerful words. Nicely rhyming too

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    1. Thank you so much.
      Always look forward to your comments and feed back.

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  2. Lovely words...i mean lovely feelings :)

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    1. Feels good to express the feelings.
      Glad you like and thanks for checking.

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    1. Rupa,I appreciate your imagination and feelings.

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    2. Rupa,I appreciate your imagination and feelings.

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    3. Onkar :
      Thank you so much.

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    4. BHOWMIK :
      Imaginations and feelings just flow sometimes. I seem to simply jot them down.
      Thank you so much for your words of appreciation.

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  4. You'll make it! Now give physical form to your abstract feelings and let your courage materialize. Go at it! Don't look back! luv u.

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    1. Yes, plan to now. With your encouragement and support, hope I do not have to look back again. No matter how treacherous the trail must be ......
      Lots of luv B Bee.

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  5. That was a good imagination and the pictures you posted tells as much the words.

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    1. Glad you like my imagination.
      Thank you so much for the lovely words of appreciation.

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  6. now that is some love words put together to say a lot ..
    well done very phylosophical to me ..

    Bikram's

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    1. Thanks a lot Bikram.
      Didn't mean to, but yes it did turn philosophical for some, when imaginations and feelings met.

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  7. Ruprekha,

    Loneliness is something which readily available to us all the time even in a crowded gathering. We all have our own ways to take shelter in it whenever we need it. Beautifully composed.

    Take care

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    1. Agree with you. That is why I feel loneliness is the only person who never leaves you, stands by you at all times. Only you need to realize that and lean on him for comfort when you feel every one else has left you.
      Thank you so much. Always look forward to your kind words of appreciation.

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  8. That is really some great writing! I feel the same way about loneliness too. :)

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    1. Thank you so much Jyothi.
      Yes, loneliness seems to be always by your side waiting with his comforting open arms to hold you whenever the need arose.

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  9. wonderfully written

    that first image is haunting

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    1. Thanks Sujatha.
      Hey didn't mean to scare you any way :) with the picture. You can even tread a haunting trail like that even when you do not have anyone by your side. Loneliness is always there to stand by you, support you.

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  10. For me, I love to be alone, even though I do like to be with friends and some close relatives, still I cherish my solitude.
    Such a beautiful poem, oozing with feelings.
    I tried to post comment a few times, but something is wrong with my internet connections, I just could not post it.
    So how have you been, I missed you.

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    1. Thanks a lot rama, I am so glad you like it.
      How true! Yes, agree with you fully.
      I'm doing well now, the foot is much better although movements are restricted even now. Joined work from last week.
      Missed you too. Take care.

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  11. What a talented writer you are! Keep it up!

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    1. Oh no, I'm embarrassed gigihawaii, its just the expression of my feelings of a particular moment.
      Thank you so much for your encouraging words.

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  12. Great feelings with your words that came so spontaneously.

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    1. Thank you so much, those are truly very encouraging words for me.

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  13. wow! wonderfully written!

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  14. I read the lines twice; got soaked in it. Loved the lines and the choice of words...Wonderful :)

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    1. Coming from you its a wonderful compliment Insigna.
      Thank you so much.

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  15. You express so well and the words are full of feelings.
    Lucky to have come to your blog.I will go through your blog in detail to makke up for what I have missed all these days
    Thanks for the comments

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    1. Glad you like my space.
      Thank you so much for your appreciation with wonderful words. Yes, please keep visiting.

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  16. A lovely weave of words Ruprekha:)Every journey becomes easy with a soul mate!

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  17. How deep is the touch of words linked together in the form of soul mate! Really touching indeed

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