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Saturday, 5 November 2011

Poem : Lost Love



Pic downloaded from the internet



O ye moon dainty pray don't beam so bright,
                             Cos no where do I find my smile tonight.
               O'er the luxurious beauty of a vale,
                             I seem to have lost forever my gale.
               Do walk again that familiar mile,
                            Along do bring my lost smile.
                    
 
                   Ruprekha Mushahary
                                 11.02.2011
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19 comments:

  1. Rupkamal9 March 2011 at 21:04

    Nice one. difficult to create meaningful rhyming words but I think you have managed it to quite an extent here. Keep writing and hope to see more posts from you.

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  2. Unknown21 April 2011 at 03:59

    The flicker of hope at the end....nice to have the opportunity to read some beautiful poems...hope more will come from the magic pen..

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  3. P.N. Subramanian2 November 2011 at 06:43

    I am unable to distinguish the beauty of what you have penned and the moon beaming bright.

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  4. Anonymous2 November 2011 at 09:09

    What a beautiful photo!

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  5. Ramakrishnan6 November 2011 at 06:51

    Hi
    Came through PNS. Nice verse and beautiful pic of the magical moon.

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  6. Ruprekha6 November 2011 at 08:35

    @ R. Ramakrishnan :
    Thank you so much for visiting and appreciation.

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  7. SATYA LAKSHMI6 November 2011 at 09:06

    I was speechless. Feeling very very sad

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  8. Ruprekha6 November 2011 at 21:00

    @ Pom :
    @ anupam :
    Thanks a lot ... you both are such wonderful poets, I'm overwhelmed at your appreciation of my humble effort to pen what I felt at that moment.

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  9. Ruprekha6 November 2011 at 21:20

    @ P. N. Subramanian :
    The beautiful valley where I have grown up as a happy carefree child, lost my inner happiness as a grown up. The moon seems to ignore my sorrow and smile her brightest smile. Everything is so perfect, the valley/the moon, yet, I can not smile, it's lost somewhere. I know it's here very close by, there is flicker of hope.... someday I will smile along ....

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  10. Ruprekha6 November 2011 at 21:30

    @ Latha Vijayakumar :
    Thank you so much, means a lot ....
    Those few words from you speak volume .....

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  11. Sujatha Sathya7 November 2011 at 19:25

    you are into poetry too? nice

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  12. Bikram8 November 2011 at 02:43

    Wow the words and the picture ..
    the picture is beautiful ..

    Bikram's

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  13. Ruprekha8 November 2011 at 08:54

    @ Sujatha :
    :)

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  14. Ruprekha8 November 2011 at 08:55

    @ Bikramjit :
    Thanks a lot ....

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  15. Dark Knight12 November 2011 at 07:22

    You're quite the poet, nice site!

    Come visit mine when you have time.

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  16. Ruprekha29 November 2011 at 03:33

    @ Dark Knight :
    Thank you so much. Do keep visiting.

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  17. Powerful Love Shabar Mantra29 April 2021 at 00:11

    Such a lovely post for lost love but did you know you can get lost love back with the help of astrology.

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  18. Rajveer shastri25 September 2022 at 09:49

    If you really love the person and can’t live without your previous partner, then all you need to do is to go back and consult with our astrologers about how to restore lost love through astrology.

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  19. baba ji25 September 2022 at 22:49

    By using the powerful mantra, you are able to experience the bliss of the times and ensure that you face no troubles of any kind in the days to come. The fact that you were able to get back to the love of your life without much difficulty is what makes the story even more powerful and inspiring. You will be able to regain the lost love in your life with the help of the love mantra.

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