Saturday, 5 November 2011

Poem : Lost Love



Pic downloaded from the internet



O ye moon dainty pray don't beam so bright,
                             Cos no where do I find my smile tonight.
               O'er the luxurious beauty of a vale,
                             I seem to have lost forever my gale.
               Do walk again that familiar mile,
                            Along do bring my lost smile.
                    
 
                   Ruprekha Mushahary
                                 11.02.2011

16 comments:

  1. Nice one. difficult to create meaningful rhyming words but I think you have managed it to quite an extent here. Keep writing and hope to see more posts from you.

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  2. The flicker of hope at the end....nice to have the opportunity to read some beautiful poems...hope more will come from the magic pen..

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  3. I am unable to distinguish the beauty of what you have penned and the moon beaming bright.

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  4. Hi
    Came through PNS. Nice verse and beautiful pic of the magical moon.

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  5. @ R. Ramakrishnan :
    Thank you so much for visiting and appreciation.

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  6. I was speechless. Feeling very very sad

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  7. @ Pom :
    @ anupam :
    Thanks a lot ... you both are such wonderful poets, I'm overwhelmed at your appreciation of my humble effort to pen what I felt at that moment.

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  8. @ P. N. Subramanian :
    The beautiful valley where I have grown up as a happy carefree child, lost my inner happiness as a grown up. The moon seems to ignore my sorrow and smile her brightest smile. Everything is so perfect, the valley/the moon, yet, I can not smile, it's lost somewhere. I know it's here very close by, there is flicker of hope.... someday I will smile along ....

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  9. @ Latha Vijayakumar :
    Thank you so much, means a lot ....
    Those few words from you speak volume .....

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  10. Wow the words and the picture ..
    the picture is beautiful ..

    Bikram's

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  11. @ Bikramjit :
    Thanks a lot ....

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  12. You're quite the poet, nice site!

    Come visit mine when you have time.

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  13. @ Dark Knight :
    Thank you so much. Do keep visiting.

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