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O ye moon dainty pray don't beam so bright,
Cos no where do I find my smile tonight.
O'er the luxurious beauty of a vale,
I seem to have lost forever my gale.
Do walk again that familiar mile,
Along do bring my lost smile.
Ruprekha Mushahary
11.02.2011
Nice one. difficult to create meaningful rhyming words but I think you have managed it to quite an extent here. Keep writing and hope to see more posts from you.
ReplyDeleteThe flicker of hope at the end....nice to have the opportunity to read some beautiful poems...hope more will come from the magic pen..
ReplyDeleteI am unable to distinguish the beauty of what you have penned and the moon beaming bright.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful photo!
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ReplyDeleteCame through PNS. Nice verse and beautiful pic of the magical moon.
@ R. Ramakrishnan :
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I was speechless. Feeling very very sad
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Thanks a lot ... you both are such wonderful poets, I'm overwhelmed at your appreciation of my humble effort to pen what I felt at that moment.
@ P. N. Subramanian :
ReplyDeleteThe beautiful valley where I have grown up as a happy carefree child, lost my inner happiness as a grown up. The moon seems to ignore my sorrow and smile her brightest smile. Everything is so perfect, the valley/the moon, yet, I can not smile, it's lost somewhere. I know it's here very close by, there is flicker of hope.... someday I will smile along ....
@ Latha Vijayakumar :
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, means a lot ....
Those few words from you speak volume .....
you are into poetry too? nice
ReplyDeleteWow the words and the picture ..
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Bikram's
@ Sujatha :
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@ Bikramjit :
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You're quite the poet, nice site!
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@ Dark Knight :
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. Do keep visiting.
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